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【篇一】雅思写作典型例题16道

雅思写作典型例题16道

1. Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well. Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 教育：p.45, no.20;21;

2. Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment, others think it has other function. discuss and give your opinion.

3. Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it?

4. Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world"s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?飞机的利弊

5.It is now possible to perform everyday tasks, such as bank transaction, shopping or even office works, without meeting people face to face. What are the effects it may have on individuals and the society as a whole?科技的影响 p.76, 6;

6.With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, less people tend to write letters. Some people even think the skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think letter writing is? 科技的影响

7.Some believes that cultural traditions will be destroyed by the money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others think it is the only way to save these cultural traditions. Discuss both views and show your own opinion.旅游的影响

8.Some people suggest when people move to a new country they should accept the new culture as their own，rather than have the separate minority groups which has their own different cultures. To what extent do you agree?cultural exchange vs. cultural identity

9.The best way to solve the world"s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent you agree or disagree?环境类话题p.52, no.31; p.54, 33

10.Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since the computer technology is so advanced that the Internet and computer can replace them. To what extend do you agree or disagree?市政基础：图书馆问题 p. 43, no.16 建筑：p.77, 7 and 9

11.Nowadays some people like to give help or donate to local communication directly where someone need help. Other people prefer to give money to national or international organizations. What is your opinion?社会问题：人际互助

12.The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences and only governmental actions can solve the problem. Do you agree or disagree?社会问题：住房与政府

13.Some people think that government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists (eg. painters, musicians, poets), while some others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion? 文艺的价值与资助(政府)

14.Some consider that history is little or no use to us. Others believe that studying history helps us to know the present. Discuss their views and give your own opinion.历史的价值p.37, 8

15.媒体话题：讲义p.40, No. 12;13;

16.广告话题：c6-t1;讲义 p.49, no.25;

雅思技巧：雅思写作范文怎样合理利用

在雅思考试中，很多考生由于对作文的话题不熟悉导致没有话可说，甚至有些学生由于词汇量不够而限制了表达自己的观点，因此很多学生将雅思写作范文当做救命稻草，日夜苦背，我们承认，多背几篇雅思范文确实可以帮助我们提高词汇量，也能帮助我们提高写作 水平，但是一味的只知道原模原样的背，不但浪费了考生宝贵的复习时间，收效也甚微，那不原模原样的背，该怎么背?雅思写作技巧的掌握对于考试还是很有帮助的，希望大家能够总是雅思写作辅导的内容。

一篇好的作文，不在于他有多么华丽的辞藻，而在与她的结构，如果你的文章也像范文一样条理清晰，结构严谨，逻辑严密，那怎么 可能会得不到高分呢，所以，原模原样的被范文，不如仔细的研究范文的文章结构，看范文中是怎么安排段落的，段落之间以及句子之 间是怎么连接在一起的，运用了哪些衔接手段等等。如果你的基础很差，语言能力很低，不妨通过多分析几篇范文，来明白写作的框架 和机构，然后选择几篇范文熟练背诵之后将他们改写成自己的话，如果你的目标为5分，那么备考时就以一定要注重题意的理解，写作基 本模板的训练和简单句式的练习，尤其注意常见单词的词性正确使用。

另外，在如果你可以在短短的30分钟内，根据给定的话题快速的把你的观点条理清晰的陈述出来，再加上丰富准确的词汇，多样的句 式结构，以及你独特的见解，那么一定可以吸引考官的注意力，让他不得不给你一个高分数。所以，背范文不光要被词汇，还要学会鉴 赏好文章的结构。

雅思技巧：写作七大语法致命伤

雅思写作语法致命伤1. 双谓语错句

e.g. For those under 26， there were 80% students study for career.

There be句型属于双谓语错句高发句型，因为句中的be动词已经是谓语，而句子后面的动词通常是定语从句中的成分，故不能作为主句中的谓语。例句中同时出现了“were”和“study”，根据上面的分析，were应该是谓语，而study for career应该是定语从句，因此，例句应修正改成：

For those under 26， there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26， there were 80% students studying for career.

又如：Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.应改成：

Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.

雅思写作语法致命伤2. 句子不完整

e.g. The most popular kind of transport was by road.

句中主语是the most popular kind of transport，谓语动词(系动词)是was， 而by road按照语法应该是方式状语，此句缺乏表语。应改成：

The most popular kind of transport was road.

又如：Many factories in order to get more profits， which made waste water and waste gas.

去除目的状语“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定语从句“which made waste water and waste gas”， 剩下的是many factories， 不能作为一个句子。根据此句想表达的意思，应改为：

Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and waste gas.

雅思写作语法致命伤3. 主系表结构使用错误

e.g. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

此句的主干结构是：we are impossible“我们是不可能”，表意不对。这种表达在英语中对应的句型是：It is…for…to…， 所以应该改成：

It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.

类似的错误例句还有：People are very convenient to get information on the Internet. His profession is a teacher.

雅思写作语法致命伤4. 情态动词后的动词原形和动名词的使用出错

e.g. Another equally vital point to be considered is that building them may costs much money and energy.

这种错误可能是笔误，在雅思作文中偶尔出现不至于扣分，但是通篇都是这样的错误，那么肯定是有影响的。

e.g. Another point to be discussed is that more time spending on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

“花更多时间在电脑上”这个动词短语作为主语应该要用动名词形式：

Another point to be discussed is that spending more time on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.

雅思写作语法致命伤5. 标点符号用错

e.g. As far as I am concerned， people should take exercise and relax themselves on a weekly basis. Because it offers great opportunities to release their stress.

Because引导的句子做原因状语从句，既然是从句，那么前面就不应该使用句号使其独立成句，而应该改成逗号，because首字母小写。

雅思写作语法致命伤6. 词性使用错误

e.g. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.

Instead of是介词，而这里构成to do(不定式)，只能用动词。因此，可改为：

One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.

e.g. Nowadays， some students study many subjects in university， which leads to that they suffer great mental pressure.

Lead to中to是介词，后面不能直接加句子，因此可在leads to后加一名词，构成同位语从句：

Nowadays， some students study many subjects in university， which leads to the fact that they suffer great mental pressure. 或Nowadays， some students study many subjects in university， which makes them suffer great mental pressure.

雅思写作语法致命伤7. 从句的误用和滥用

e.g. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.

“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定语，固定句式“the reason why…is that…”why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句连用，气势磅礴，这就是所谓的高分句型。

e.g. In this essay， I will discuss what those， who are two kinds of people in this topic， are how to think and how to choose. 实再迂回婉转，不知所云。

除了上面所列其中7类语法错误情况以外，常见的雅思写作语法错误还包括：主谓一致，时态，特殊句型(如倒装句，强调句等)使用错误以及逻辑问题等。

雅思技巧：雅思写作多元化如何实现

1. 词汇语法多样性的体现

1). 词性的多样性

有调查指出，中国学生在作文中最常出现的词性为动词，因为我们脑中时刻紧记着以前语文老师要求的只有用动词才能写出生动的文章，才能体现我们的博览群书。然而英语中却不尽然。通过对大多高分范文的分析，不难发现，除了动词词组的运用，各种的名词的使用更得考官的青睐，更能体现外国人的文风。拿小作文的发展趋势做例子，大家都知道增加、降低等动词的表达，如increase steadily, decrease sharply等，但转换一种方式用名词的形式表达，就更显得多样了,如experience a steady increase, undergo a sharp decrease。而如“surface”一词，学生经常只会用它的名词用法“......的表面”，却从来不用它的动词形式。如果你留心原版杂志和阅读材料,它的动词用法无处不在。例如“The fact of his plan surfaced”这里的“surface”就相当于“appear”。所以不管什么词性，只要用了不能的表达方法，其结果都是不同的。当然是指正确的表达方法。

2). 同义词多样性

在写作中，如果一个相同的词在250字的文中出现了不下三次，那么作为学生自己，也会觉得自己的文章没有可看性，更别提考官，可见此学生语言功底一般，又怎么拿得到高分。而如果一篇文章，关于同个词却有三四中表达方法，无疑给这篇文章加分不少。其实同义词也是展现一个学生英语水平的一个媒介。中国学生最常用的形容词就是good，不管是修饰什么名词，用上再说，殊不知这已经给这篇文章打了个相对低的起评分，所以如何来表达不同的“好”呢?我们就可以用excellent、marvellous、gorgeous、splendid、wonderful等。再如不要一想到“越来越多”就用“more and more”尝试用“an increasing number”这样不同的词来表达，势必会给平淡的文章增添亮点。

3). 句式结构的多样性

用丰富多彩的句型，也是雅思写作能得高分的标准之一。例如有这样一个句型：“If we don"t recognize the...”，我们是否可以替换为：“Failure to recognize...”，再如 “sth. happened in .”，我们也可以替换为“1998 saw sth happening.”，这样显得更加的地道。此处还推荐学生能用不同的从句写出漂亮的句子，为文章加分。当然，这并不是意味着整篇文章都是复合句或并列句，如果能很好的做到长短句结合，使文章通顺连贯，也是能得到考官喜欢的。

2. 几点建议

在简单介绍了词汇语法多样性的体现后，我将提出几点建议，促进考生在备考中做好准备。

1). 做好词汇短语的积累工作。很多考生有这样一个误区，他们认为只要背了某些参考书上所谓的模板，再积累些论据，写作的问题就迎刃而解了，殊不知，却得到了本文开始的结果。当然这里的积累并非死记硬背，而是通过将一个单词的不同形式，以及其同义表达等放在一起记忆就事半功倍。若遇到一个新词，就要在脑中搜寻它的相关信息，这样一来，就能在考试这么短的时间中马上浮现了。但是一次的记忆是远远不够的，所以适时的重复记忆也非常重要。

2). 多看高分范文，并对其中的词汇句型多样性进行总结。考生在备考过程中看范文时往往只是从整体上学习了其论据的安排，而忽略了细节的词汇句型的运用，所以教师在上课时也要合理安排时间，将一部分用在对其的讲解上。学生最好准备一本笔记本专门用做记录好词好句和其转换形式。

3). 加强练习。经常有学生问，作文提高是不是只要多写几篇就可以了，其实答案是否定的。这里所指的加强练习是在一定的基础之上的，即学生已经基本掌握了雅思写作的各项要求。那么这样练习才能有的放矢。通过几次的练习，能检查出学生多样性的掌握情况，并对症下药，了解不足处，在真正考试中能突围而出。

【篇二】雅思写作典型例题16道

这些题目是题库里反复出现的核心练习题，并且具备举一反三的功能，即解决了一道题就基本上能解决一类题。这样，同学们就可以丰富自己应对这一类话题的ideas and expressions。

1. many people believe that the main aim for university education is to help graduates to find better jobs, while some people believe that university education has wider benefits for individuals and society . Discuss both views and give your opinion.71208

2. it is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

3. Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it?

4. Higher education can be funded by several ways such as the following:1. All costs paid by the government; 2. All costs paid by the students;3. All costs paid by the government loan which students have to pay back after graduation.Please discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of all these three theories above and decide which the best is.

5. Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study just as well at home. What extent do you agree or disagree?

1.有关雅思议论文写作论据总结

2.高中议论文的写作方法

3.科技议论文写作思路

4.高中议论文写作指要

5.中考议论文的写作指导

6.关于议论文的写作方法

7.高中议论文写作要点

8.英语议论文的写作诀窍

9.议论文写作论据：知错就改

10.议论文如何入题高中议论文写作指导

【篇三】雅思写作典型例题16道

雅思写作中7个典型错误例子分析汇总

一、各种前后不一致

说话肯定前面说完了后面得跟上吧!比如：When one have enough money, she can do anything she want to do.

one是第三人称单数，而且have应改为has; want应改为wants, 典型的主谓不一致，要改写的没改写;

改为：When one has money, she can do anything she wants (to do).

二、中式思维要人命啊!

中式化。比如：There are many ways we get to know the outside world.

分析：“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outside world”。原本两个句子很正常，但用中式思维把两个句子一连起来，感觉就不对了，而且一种浓厚的中式乡村英语范袭来;

改为：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.

三、句子随意添加

一般都是烤鸭们写完了一句话之后，咦，不对，少写了一些东西，得加上去，然后就出现了这样的句子

There are many way to get the news. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and soon.

其实也很好改，注意标点符号的使用，news后面加了点，就是句子的结束了，然后For还大写，这样后面就彻底成一个句子啦，不对;

改为：There are many ways to get the news, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.

四、词性用错啦

这个还要解释么，大家应该经常犯错吧……介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。

None can negative the importance of money. negative是什么词性呀，用到这里了，应该用动词：否定，deny!

五、指代不清

比如：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.

哈哈，这个句子相当于“我是谁的谁的谁的谁”。考官看到就蒙圈了…………娘啊，这到底是啥句子啊……

改为：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

六、修饰词错位

英语与汉语不同，放错一个位置，句子的意思就会完全发生变化啦!会造成了不必要的误解。

比如：He believe him can do it well and he will better know the world outside the world.

分析：better位置不对啊，应该是 he will know the world outside the world better，放到最后。

七、用词不当

比如：The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.

显然，把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use(不断增加的使用)”应改为“abusive use(滥用)”。

雅思写作范文：资源快速消耗

Task：The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?

Sample answer：

The universal phenomenon of excessive consumption of natural resources actually remains a subject of public interest and concern. The objective of this essay is to outline both the potential problems of this negative tendency and appropriate ways of dealing with it.

Consuming considerable resources will cause inevitable environmental pollution. The low efficiency of resources use in factories may aggravate this problem. One of the best solutions may be encouraging companies to adopt more eco-friendly equipment, making optimal use of materials. Meanwhile, local governments can enact stricter environment-protection standards to normalize the enterprise operations.

In addition, since available natural resources are quite limited on the earth, the overuse of these restricted resources will worsen the shortage of natural materials and lower people’s standard of living indirectly. It is well-recognized that only a few natural resources can be used directly in our daily life. For example, the drinkable water accounts for just less than 1% of all the world water resources. Also, to meet the basic needs of people, some alternative materials have been invented when some resources are in a short supply. For instance, artificial cotton, a material which is made from rice straw, has replaced cotton in clothing industry in recent years. However, the clothes made of artificial cotton are definitely not as comfortable as the natural ones. Wearing these clothes means a lower life quality to some people to some extent. To address this problem, people should develop a more active attitude towards economizing resources, leading a low carbon life.

To summarize, consuming natural resources at an increasing rate may pose a threat on environment and people’s life. Business, governments and society should work together to solve these problems.

(280 words)

雅思写作范文：新闻媒体的好坏

News media have become influential to our lives, and some people think that is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

新闻媒体对我们的生活产生影响，有人认为这是一种消极的发展。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

思路解析：

1. 负面影响：以新闻为主的生活方式会让人们筋疲力尽。举例，报纸和电视吸取了人们所有的关注，这让人们无法关注自己的事情，也缺乏时间来维持家庭关系。

2. 负面影响：负面新闻会引发社会不安。举例，很多谣言，关于社会传染病，或是很多逃犯的信息，会让人们生活在恐惧中。

3. 负面影响：媒体是洗脑工具。举例，处于政治目的，很多新闻媒体会对某些进行毫无根据的攻击和抹黑。这会误导投票人的判断和立场。

4. 正面影响：新闻媒体能提供有用的信息，建议和指导。举例，天气预报和交通堵塞的信息能帮助人们制定合适的出行计划和路线。

参考范文：

Nowadays, the expanding influence of news media on the society has been a heated social issue in debate. Some believe this trend is negative because the media controls minds of the public. Personally, I partially agree with this view, and my reasons will be explored as below.

The most worrying aspect of new media is that it overwhelms people’s daily lives. Actually, our lives of today are news-oriented, because of the 24-hour nonstop news cycles on TV, radio and Internet. Under such news bombardment, the information overload takes place, which means people’s attentions and minds have to be glued to focusing on and interpreting endless news, comments, gossips and rumors, necessary and unnecessary, no matter where they are, in workplaces, schools, buses or homes. As a result, news media is a huge distraction, which makes people exhausted and reduces their concentration and energy on their tasks or families.

Another big concern of news media is about its roles in manipulating people’s thoughts. Psychologically speaking, watching news media is a strong process of washing brain, in which the personal judgments of individual viewers might be removed and replaced with the media-established ideas. For example, for the purpose of politics, many influential newspapers, TV programs and online websites disclose the foibles of privacy, and even deliberately fabricate false rumors, scandals to diminish some political candidates in an election. Obviously, the cheatings and lies on news media are detrimental to the social equity and democracy, because they keep voters from thinking freely and independently.

However, the positive impact news media bring to our lives can never be ignored. In fact, the exposure to these news and reports can give the audience valuable messages and suggestions in day-to-day life. For example, the information about forecasts of weather and traffic situations in rush hours on regional newspapers or radio channels can instruct local residents to make proper schedules, plans and routers for travelling outside. In addition, reports about pressing social problems like epidemics, natural disasters, violence and crimes in streets also help to arouse the public’s awareness of the importance of improving education and health care systems, as well as the necessity of saving environment.

In conclusion, the demerits caused by news media override its benefits for the public. Although it can provide useful and practical information to the audience, it influences people in more negative ways, including an unbalanced life due to addiction in news, as well as the misunderstanding about social issues.

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